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Hypnotizer



Joined: 20 Jul 2006
Posts: 2

Posted: Thu Jul 20, 2006 11:31 pm    Post subject: Just created a store...Would love any constructive criticism  

Hi Everyone,

Very new to the world of online stores and marketing!

After practicing clinical hypnotherapy with great success, I am venturing into the world of online sales.

Check out my store here

www.hypnosis.ecrater.com

I would appreciate any constructive criticism.

Thanks
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AuntNeeNee



Joined: 03 Jun 2005
Posts: 380
Location: Indiana

Posted: Thu Jul 20, 2006 11:38 pm    Post subject: Re: Just created a store...Would love any constructive criti  

Hello! And welcome to PSU!

Very nice store! No cirticism here! Love the photos!

And VERY interesting product!!!!

I think I'm getting sleeeeeeepy. :shock:
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2BOYSandTOYS



Joined: 14 Mar 2005
Posts: 10095
Location: Kansas

Posted: Thu Jul 20, 2006 11:40 pm    Post subject: Re: Just created a store...Would love any constructive criti  

Welcome to PSU!! I like the lay-out, but (I use FF) - I think there's part of your 'store overview' that's missing on my screen.

Hypnosis is a very powerful tool that can enable us to manifest is the last part that I see, and I'm sure there's more - but I can't figure out how to get to it!! So - point me there or perhaps see if the front page structure can be
tweeked so I can see what you have to say!

Your writing is great, your items are well described and I think you've got a great start!

Best of luck with your sales and your site!! :D :D
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Hypnotizer



Joined: 20 Jul 2006
Posts: 2

Posted: Fri Jul 21, 2006 1:36 am    Post subject: Re: Just created a store...Would love any constructive criti  

Thanks to you both!

2BOYSandTOYS I have changed the text format and everything shows now. Thanks for pointing this out. 2 sets of eyes are definately better than 1!
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AuntNeeNee



Joined: 03 Jun 2005
Posts: 380
Location: Indiana

Posted: Fri Jul 21, 2006 7:23 am    Post subject: Re: Just created a store...Would love any constructive criti  

Didn't see that, sorry! Guess I was distracted by the pretty picture! :shock:
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2BOYSandTOYS



Joined: 14 Mar 2005
Posts: 10095
Location: Kansas

Posted: Fri Jul 21, 2006 9:07 am    Post subject: Re: Just created a store...Would love any constructive criti  

Nadine - I too loved the pictures, but started reading about the store and the offerings - and noticed the uh-oh....

Hypnotizer - you're welcome!! And I so agree that 2 eyes are better than 1...I usally have someone (anyone) read my written thoughts before I publish as I always mutilate at least one word somehow - my most common is form - when it should have been from... :D :D
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CrystalStar



Joined: 06 Mar 2005
Posts: 3571

Posted: Fri Jul 21, 2006 9:50 am    Post subject:  

Ewww....nice. What types of hynosis CDs? I wanna turn Erin into DreadMunk!! LOL

Will have to take a look later.
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2BOYSandTOYS



Joined: 14 Mar 2005
Posts: 10095
Location: Kansas

Posted: Fri Jul 21, 2006 11:33 am    Post subject: Re: Just created a store...Would love any constructive criti  

:shock: :shock: :shock: :wink: Behave girl, behave...

Hypnotizer - don't mind her, she just likes to pick on me (wahhhhh - JK) :cry: :cry: :wink: :roll:
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deathangel



Joined: 26 Mar 2006
Posts: 98

Posted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 8:12 pm    Post subject: Re: Just created a store...Would love any constructive criti  

i love it. will wait a little before i try your weight loss one.


QUestion where on your administration page did it let you add the main logo under that eye pic. I have been having trouble finding that one my site.
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PKC Direct



Joined: 23 Jun 2005
Posts: 822
Location: Kansas City, Kansas

Posted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 8:29 pm    Post subject: Re: Just created a store...Would love any constructive criti  

Site looks good in FF and IE. It is really a nice site, kind of hypnotizing you

know. Can't figure that out, just had the urge to keep looking. :lol: :lol: :lol:
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